Good News in the Publishing Industry

Posted on August 25, 2011 by editor| 49 Comments





A glimmer of hope from the New York Times:


“The publishing industry has expanded in the past three years as Americans increasingly turned to e-books and juvenile and adult fiction, according to a new survey of thousands of publishers, retailers and distributors that challenges the doom and gloom that tends to dominate discussions of the industry’s health.”


Read the full article here: Publishing Gives Hints of Revival, Data Show

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A blast of a summer

Posted on August 15, 2011 by editor| 56 Comments

Thanks to everyone for a wonderful summer! I know there are a few weeks left in August, but the last of the summer manuscript evaluation slots are spoken for, so we’re on to the Autumn schedule!

Available slots for Fall:

September 15: one slot still available.

October 15: two slots still available.

November 15: four slots still available.

Other news from Murdock Editing!

I’m updating the website! Poor www.murdockediting.com‘s current design and info is four years old, which I believe is approximately 165 in internet years.

The fiverr charity drive continues! We’ve raised enough to buy 125 books to put a stack of books on every desk in a classroom, but we’re still aiming for the big prize: $1,000 for 500 books to start home libraries for a neighborhood of low-income families. Check it out here: http://fiverr.com/gigs/read-your-query-letter-and-tell-you-if-id-request-your-manuscript-or-not-and-why and here: http://fiverr.com/gigs/read-your-first-five-pages-and-tell-you-if-id-request-your-manuscript-or-not-and-why. 




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Murdock Editing Website Under Construction

Posted on July 27, 2011 by editor| 52 Comments

Finally, after many promises, I’ll be updating the main, horribly out of date Murdock Editing website over the next few weeks. With WordPress for Dummies at my side, I’ll be *gulp* doing it on my own, at least until I get so frustrated I hire a pro. In the meantime, if (when) the site goes down or for some reason suddenly looks like a disaster zone, please bear with me!

And if you hear the sound of yelling/books flying across the room/computers being smashed coming from the general direction of South Boston, it’s okay. We’ll get there! Thanks for your patience!

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In Which I Brag for Charity: Fiverr Reviews So Far

Posted on July 25, 2011 by editor| 50 Comments

We’re still going full steam ahead on the Fiverr for First Book drive. Give me your first five pages and we’ll give a kid a book!


Check it out: http://fiverr.com/gigs/read-your-first-five-pages-and-tell-you-if-id-request-your-manuscript-or-not-and-why

  1. brilliant very constructive as always :) thanks so much
  2. fantastic advise agreed 100% and am in the process of changing my beginning based on her comments…well recommended.
  3. I was amazed at the depth and detail that ME Boston provided me for only five dollars in his detailed critique of the first five pages of my novel. He caught every error in grammar and punctuation and warned me about trying to give too many early details. This was easily worth ten times what I paid.
  4. Thanks for the pro feedback. Although some might find the highlighted passing delicious (like a Beta Reader of mine) others may indeed find it “too much” especially if they’re a beleagured agent’s assistant “looking for a reason” to reject and move to the next submittal. So I may omit to avoid risk.
  5. Thanks for the advice
  6. This is a good gig, especially if it’s your first attempt at writing something, good constructive feedback
  7. Thanks again Lindsay for all your feedback. It was worth way more than 5 dollars! I would definitely use you again as the book goes through rewrites.
  8. Awesome! Would recommend highly!
  9. Thank you so much for your feedback! Great to hear! And it also means I have a lot of tweaking to do!! Julie
  10. Thanks so much for this awesome critique, Lindsay! I appreciate your honesty and great editing. I, too, was worried about her first seeing him at school. I don’t want my Ms to resemble Twilight at all. I will try and find another way to introduce her visions. Thanks!
  11. very good feedback, and an excellent help with my novel. Would recommend to anyone needing a little extra help. Thanks again!
  12. Great job! Very happy! Bravo!
  13. WONDERFUL critique. Extremely insightful and helpful. Thank you.
  14. Very helpful, thanks Lindsay!
  15. Thank for the advice – recommended gig.
  16. Great Job. Would definitely recommend!
  17. As usual, the advice was extremely valuable. It made me consider what I was including in my letter and why.
  18. Advice was very helpful – thanks!
  19. Great comments and suggestions for improvement! I will definitely buy from you again.
  20. brilliant feedback, would absolutely work with her again!
  21. I’m very happy with the critique and I definitely recommend this.
  22. Such helpful feedback! Will definitely use MEboston again as I re-tweak my query letter. Thank you!!
  23. amazing!
  24. Thank you for the helpful insight.
  25. Thank you so much for your notes! I got some great feedback from you!
  26. Hands down, this is the best $5 I have ever spent! Super helpful!
  27. Thank you so much for the critique. I am elated that this new query works!
  28. Lindsay was wonderful, helpful and honest. It’s what I needed!
  29. The work was professional, timely and most of all helpful! Thank you so much, will definetally recommend and use again.
  30. Editor provided a meaningful critique that I can use to rework my query.
  31. Fast response, outstanding service! Exceeded my expectations.

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    Why Do You Need to Hire an Editor?

    Posted on July 21, 2011 by editor| 46 Comments

    Straight from the (wonderful) BookEnds’s Agent’s mouth:

    Your Book Needs Editing

    I will reject any query that tells me your book needs editing and I suspect most agents will agree that this is a red flag. But why? Don’t all books need editing? Why is this a red flag?

    For me this shows that you’re not ready to query and that your book isn’t complete; that you’re not sending me a query because you feel your book is ready for editors and readers to see, but because you’ve done all you can, hit a wall, and want someone else to help you fix the problems. That’s not an agent’s job; in fact, it’s not an editor’s job.

    Sure, every book needs editing and an author needs to be willing to edit, but an agent’s job or editor’s job is to help you reach deeper than you’ve ever reached before to find ways to take what’s already a great book and make it phenomenal. When submitting to an agent you need to look at it, sit back in your chair, and say, “Yes, edits are done. It’s ready.” Not, “Well, it still needs work, but I’ll query anyway.”

    Jessica

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    Murdock Editing Mid-Summer Update!

    Posted on July 20, 2011 by editor| 46 Comments

    Is it hot where you are? GOOD LORD it is hot here. There are not enough fans or ice cream trucks in the world to make this comfortable. Don’t tell my conservation-minded friends, but I’m throwing in the towel and buying an air conditioner. I’ve lost that battle and I’m okay with that!

    So! Although I live in dread that my computer will overheat anytime I use it while the blazing sun is still up, I come to you with updates! And Questions! And charity reminders! And far, far too many exclamation points.

    *Your loving editor is currently working on a self-editing guide for first time writers. Not to put myself out of business of course, but to help you learn how to produce a cleaner, crisper manuscript less likely to be filled with agent/editor pet peeves that will send you right to the rejection pile. Plus, when working with an outside editor (Me, or any of my lovely and wonderful colleagues.), a cleaner manuscript means your editor will have more time to spend on deeper issues that can take your manuscript from passable to BUY ME NOW!

    Passages from the upcoming guide will be published here over the next several months, so be sure to check back and spread the word!

    *Do you have self-editing questions you’d like addressed here or in the guide? Send ‘em my way to editor at murdockediting dot com. If your question is used in the final version, you get a free copy.

    *We’re still going full steam ahead on the Fiverr for First Book drive. Give me your first five pages and we’ll give a kid a book!

    Check it out: http://fiverr.com/gigs/read-your-first-five-pages-and-tell-you-if-id-request-your-manuscript-or-not-and-why

    Stay cool my friends!

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    A Very Special (and Important) Message From Ira Glass

    Posted on May 20, 2011 by editor| 59 Comments



    “Nobody tells this to people who are beginners. I wish someone had told me. All of us who do creative work, we get into it because we have good taste. But there is this gap. For the first couple years you make stuff, it’s just not that good. It’s trying to be good, it has potential, but it’s not. But your taste, the thing that got you into the game, is still killer. And your taste is why your work disappoints you. A lot of people never get past this phase; they quit. Most people I know who do interesting, creative work went through years of this. We know our work doesn’t have this special thing that we want it to have. We all go through this. And if you are just starting out or you are still in this phase, you gotta know that it’s normal and the most important thing you can do is do a lot of work. Put yourself on a deadline so that every week you finish one piece. It’s only by going through a volume of work that you will close that gap and your work will be as good as your ambitions. And I took longer to figure out how to do this than anyone I’ve ever met. It’s gonna take a while. it’s normal to take a while. You just gotta fight your way through.” 


    -Ira Glass

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    New Post! Go Read This Edition

    Posted on April 28, 2011 by editor| 42 Comments

    Did you get your taxes done? Has Spring started wherever you are? Are you all caught up on your writing/publishing industry blogs?

    If not:

    • - I don’t know, TurboTax?
    • - It’s actually warm this week in Boston, so there is hope for you too!
    • - And Go Read This! 
    If you’re working on your query letter, make sure you’re at least reading (if not submitting to) Evil Editor (look for the Guess the Plot posts) and Query Shark. If you have a whole day to kill and want to snork coffee while learning how to get a query right, read the Miss Snark archives (good lord I miss that woman). Jessica at BookEnds Agency is also doing Workshop Wednesdays. Pay attention! 
    “2. Don’t waste time with the obvious.


    “My books are about the relationships between people and how they react to a murder in their midst.” 

    Doesn’t that apply to most mysteries? If you’re a New York TimesBestselling author, you could get away with this. Then again, your audience would be just as thrilled if you leaned toward them and asked if your mascara had smeared.”  



    Kristin at Pub Rants suggests querying while the querying is hot!

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    Repost: Dedicated To David

    Posted on April 28, 2011 by editor| 44 Comments

    Dear readers, I promise this will be my last irate post on David. Read to the end though, and you’ll understand why it simply had to be posted.

    Those of you who stopped by yesterday will recall our dear friend “David” (that’s his actual name, I’m just putting it in quotes because I don’t like him). Read the post below for more background on “David.”

    Why do people insist on offering misinformation on subjects they know nothing about? And why do I let it bother me so much?

    Today there was another LinkedIn question that caught my eye – an author looking for information on submitting an idea for a For Dummies book. For Dummies is published by John Wiley & Sons. I worked in editorial for Wiley for years, although not on the For Dummies books, so I thought, “Hey! Question I’ll know the answer to!”

    And there, waiting for me, was our good friend “David.”

    David offered the following advice (this is all paraphrased).

    (1) No one in publishing is buying anything anymore. Especially not self-help books. Don’t even try.
    (2) The economy stinks, so books are no longer being published. Don’t even try. 
    (3) If you do try, HIRE an agent with an NDA in place so the publishing house DOESN’T STEAL YOUR IDEA.

    I tried to post my response. But, horrors – when I hit send there was an error! I tried again! Another error! I kept trying for another half hour, because I’m apparently in need of a chill pill.

    So, having finally given up, my response to the poor, misinformed author is posted below. I hope, by some miracle, he finds it on the great interwebs.

    “Hi [Author]. Wiley, the For Dummies publisher (and my past employer) won’t generally accept unsolicited submissions. For most of the titles, the editors come up with subjects they want to market, then go out and find experts.

    If you are an expert in a certain field and already have a great platform that proves you’re the go-to guy for your subject, pitch the idea to an agent with great nonfiction credentials. If an agent thinks Wiley might want it, he or she should be able to get the editors to take a look. The official author guidelines are discussed in the link below.

    And now, to debunk another response posted earlier:

    (1) The Dummies book market is not saturated. There are, in fact, over fifty new titles being printed in this series this year alone. I’d count the 2008 titles, but it’s almost lunch time, and it would take too long.

    (2) Almost all publishers are still buying new books from new authors. Larger publishers don’t take unsolicited manuscripts, but that has nothing to do with the economy; it’s been that way for a very long time. Some small publishers still accept unsolicited manuscripts and are making no changes that indicate they will do otherwise in the future.

    (3) An agent is a good idea, but mention an NDA and they will, at best, have a good laugh. This is not how publishing works. And, despite conspiracy theories, respectable publishers don’t steal ideas.

    Good luck [Author], and please feel free to e-mail me off-board if you have any questions.

    http://www.dummies.com/Section/id-323934“

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    REPOST! What to Expect When You’re Expecting to Hire an Editor: Part III

    Posted on April 26, 2011 by editor| 47 Comments

    I’ve been getting a lot of questions lately about how you should go about picking an editor, so without further ado: What to Expect When You’re Expecting to Hire an Editor: Part III

    Once you’ve gotten past Part II - How to Find an Editor, it’s time to narrow it do to the one, the only – YOUR FREELANCE EDITOR.
    How to Choose an Editor
    There are a lot of things you should consider when hiring an editor, including, but not limited to:
    • Experience/skill level/past successes (How did your editor become an editor? Who has he or she worked with?)
    • Pricing structure/total cost (Make sure you’re getting what you’re paying for!)
    • Personality (Do you click?)
    • Areas of expertise (Does the editor know your genre? If your book is too close in plot to another book on the market, would the editor notice?)
    • Business philosophy (Can you ask questions after the edit is complete? How accesable is the editor before/during/after the edit or eval is complete? Is this a person you can count on?)
    The process can certainly be confusing, but following the steps below should keep you on the right track.
    1. Go with your gut. For a full-length book, you’ll likely be working with an editor for at least a few weeks; I’ve worked with some of my writers over several years and several books. The editing and evaluation process works best and will be the most valuable to you if you can develop a friendly, easy relationship with your editor. Early conversation – whether by e-mail or phone – should leave you feeling confident that you’re working with someone who wants to help you succeed. If you don’t feel comfortable with one editor, move on to another.
     2. Get a second opinion. I always recommend that writers ask for references, particularly when they’re looking for an editor to perform a good deal of work (line edits, developmental editing, extensive copyediting, manuscript evaluations and critiques, etc.). Go ahead and ask an editor if you can talk to one of his or her previous clients – they’ll be able to give you unique insight into the process and the value of the services you’re considering. 
    3. Do your research. Google the editor’s name and/or business name. Look for any complaints or warnings other writers may have published online. At the very least, ask the editor about any troubling posts. Of course, Google has its limitations – don’t worry too much if you find that your editor’s name brings up a whole cast of strange characters – there are at least 5 other Lindsay Murdocks that pop up on my GoogleAlerts – one of them actually lives only a few towns over!
    Also, although I’ve mentioned it before, I have to reiterate – check any editor you’re considering hiring against the Preditors and Editors database. Not all freelance editors are listed there – but if an editor does have complaints against him or her, chances are those complaints are documented on this site.
    4. Take a taste. When you order an expensive bottle of wine at a restaurant, the server will have you take a sip before serving the rest of the bottle, just to make sure you like it. An editor should do the the same – offering you a sample edit so you can see precisely what you’re getting for your money. I offer a free ten page sample edit or evaluation to ALL potential clients. Most editors I know will do the same.  
    5. Get it in Writing. Some editors use written contracts, some don’t. At the very least, get a detailed description of what you’re getting for your money, what your options are, what deliverables you can expect when, how much it’s going to cost, and when payments are due. Ask questions and get answers. Remember, your editor is a professional who will be working for you.
    BONUS: Be nice, and expect the same from your editor. We’re all in this together!

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